Catch me

Save me! Save my heart. Don't let it fall. Don't let it break.

Be my safety net. Even if you don't love me. Catch me.

Remember the times, of love and laughter?

Remember the days of heartache and sorrow?

Just once more,please  be there

I know it's ending,I do know

But lay me down gently,soften the blow to my heart

Catch me once more, be my rock

Tomorrow you can let go,but tonight,be here

Please, just be here

Reviews

[jay geenen]

yes. save my, from myself? Good write for it begged the question of saved from what. I like it.

[ICE]

I'm glad that your friend convinced you to share your writings! You are an amazing writer...this piece flowed beautifully!

[Davlin]

This piece was just as beautifully written as it was heartfelt. It took me back to a point in my life where I felt this exact same way. Even though it's not a place I wanted to go, the fact that you could conjure those feelings is a testament to your talent. Well done and thank you for sharing.

[KhelticRyder]

I will always be here to catch you. I do often recall the love, the laughter & the sorrowa that we have shared over the years. I do like this poem as it awoke many memories of you & I.

[bluessadmood]

Oh another entry ,another hit,another loveliness
Save me,My heart ,never let it fall..Be my safety net..Even if you never loved me
Catch me,remember the good time We had together,The love and The laughter
Remember days of aches and sorrows..So once more Be there
I know its ending,But lay down by me gently,Soften the blow to my heart
Catch me once again ,Be my rock,like always
Tomorrow you can go ,But tonight be mine
Oh what loveliness ,those words so warm ,they talk
lovely write..

[Wunderlich]

This is good. A solid poem. Well done.