A sense of drowning

Let me drown
so that I may reach
the water’s quiet floor

A surface of shifting,
tendril sand to rest
a lonely cheek

No, I don’t want
to breathe air
or ever make it back to shore

I have waded waves 
for far too long
and it has made me weak

Cold embrace
though not so chilly
I think that I want more
 
In this space
going on and on
no one is my critique
 
Sometimes I
drift in and out 
of  consciousness- I never had before
 
Shifted deep
into sleepy thoughts
just what is it do I seek?

 

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[Awakened Rose]

What an interesting thought.. I've never read such a concept. Beautiful work here. Thank you for sharing :)