piano player

A Poem by poetaster

i don't know what to do with this yet.

fingers dancing down the eighty-eight

© 2008 poetaster

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Fran Marie

This is highly creative ~ and cleverly done for the contest~Fran Marie

Posted 16 Years Ago

SM Davis

I love this!!!! It's so descriptive! Thank you so much for your submission. Unfortunately, you went over the seven word limit. I'M SO SORRY because I LOVED IT!!

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Well, for a one-liner its actually a GREAT start. Its elusive, inferable, curious and is a a sentence that asks A LOT of questions. A good thing.

Also "fingers dancing down the 88", is a great, structured line. NO over-wordiness, or unnecessary verbs. "dancing-down" is good...keep it up. See where it goes. Look forward to the rest of it... ~ Nancy