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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Freeze

Freeze

A Poem by Hatake
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Soul touching poetry contest entry

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A girl half hidden

in dark whispers of shadow

Her cloak, ragged and fraying

strewn across the ground


Once vibrant blonde locks

now limp, like thirsting petals

Faded blue eyes, empty

and achingly hollow


The wind howls along

with her misery

Her heart, her soul, her mind

shattered


There was a tall man

and he was hers

And while he was, she soared

glowing in joy


But then he vanished

into the purple-black night

not a trace left behind

She knows blood was spilt


It begins to rain;

God is crying

for the loss of one

and the ruin of another


And her limpid tears fall

splashing like raindrops

on the sodden grass

Her limbs shake with cold


Gleaming silver ice forms

on tear-stained lashes

           She feels strikingly numb

           sitting against the alley wall


           When she closes her eyes

           she can see him in heaven

           I’m coming, she thinks

           and her thoughts fade to grey

© 2016 Hatake


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Added on February 7, 2016
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Hatake
Hatake

MN



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