Intrinsic Immolation

It's an older song, but I'll be posting a few of these here. Listen to it and tell me what you think!!!!

Disintegrating pitifully into a frame of atrophy

You plunged into a pit of misery

Succumbing to agony

Constructed of catastrophe,

Your existence crumbles to me

Corrupting sanity.

Over and over

You have proven that you're worthless

Deeper and deeper

You sink without a purpose

Now you're in so far you can't resurface

Burning the bridges to all relations

You set spark through temptation

And watched it turn into conflagration

In ruins of yesterday

Forever there to stay

Rotting away

You lost your demeanor to foster decay

Your cessation is drawing near

The lacerations are festering sheer

I wonder... do you see things any clearer

When you look in the mirror

To see your biggest fears?

You failed all who stood by your side

Those who tried and tried

Watched as your life was pried

As the person they once knew died

If you take these exhortations into consideration

You are bound to see transformation

Reviews

[mattavelli]

I enjoyed your song. It was a nice contrast to what I've been listening to.

[Tina Kline]

Strong lyrics. A very impressive write.
The dark feelings are strong in this.

[Vanesa Markovic]

Nice to see a fellow metalhead on here!
These are some heavy lyrics but it's an all too familiar weight.
Interesting post, thank you for sharing some music with us!
-VM

[Chris]

a pretty mean self-visual... a true depression is a helluva time but the writing IS a good way to work through it.