Lost Angel

About a lost Angel that wants to go home

If tears were diamonds
I'd be a rich man
My eyes are the window to my soul
but no one knows I even exist
I was happy once
Now I'm just here
A lost generation
My wine has lost its taste
And with every sip a metallic
Taste is left on my lips
Grains of sand fall from my hands
From digging my way out of this grave
I have lost my way
but no one is there to find me
Are we really here
Do we really have free will
People don't believe in us anymore
What does love mean
I want to experience it for once in my life
I want to walk hand in hand in to the sunset
I want to kiss soft lips
I want to watch sad movies
And hold you when you cry
I spend all my time waiting
I need a distraction
Where do I go from here�

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

Hi Kelley :-) You never know, we may have been put here 5 minutes ago...with a memory!
I loved this piece of yours hon and the wish you have for true love to not just visit, but to stay. I think we all feel that way, I also believe that we are sent love from above...and when it comes we need to recognize it for the blessing that it is. So many go through life ignoring signs, such a waste...even for angels!
I sincerely hope that everyone's love will find them...SOON!!! Beautiful work...*hugs*
(Say a big hi to Tawny for me would you?)

Helen~

[Cassie]

you have brought out emotions in this piece well, its a sad poem that leaves one teary. Good job

[Dezaraye]

This is a beautiful piece, but so full of sadness. I find myself here at the moment. Trying to claw my way up and out of the dark, but finding that there's nothing to grip. You've put this very well into words. It's very moving.

[FireWoman]

I believe in love in the simple moments. The white knight on a steed saving the damsel happily ever after stuff, not so much. Love is a moment, our job is to try to let in hang out suspended as we hold our breath...

[Coyote Poetry]

It is hard to find the days when love was the only purpose and being with the one we love was our only goal. I like this poem. I wonder what happen to long walks and talk till the morning light. I allow the problems of life to block the good. I don't know how to go back to the days of long nights and great dreams. Your poem is outstanding. I know the feeling.
Coyote

[r]

so sad...

[StacyPerry]

A very in depth piece.....within my mind anyhow

[deeps]

This is really one amazing write here, It's very beuatiful
and ever so romantic. You have a sincere heart.
Keep writing forever.

[Ladysue]

This was very well written and heartfelt. Lonely and I could feel the yearning. Great job...

[justjenn_2u]

Wow! Your words are so realistic. It does seem so many of us have lost the real meaning of life and when we are dealing with people walking around in empty shells, what are we to do? This poem leaves me with a yearning to produce the perfect answer to the questions here. Intriguing! I want to read more of your work!