Words as Weapons

I really tried to use more difficult words..., but failed. I have to work on expanding my vocabulary~~!!!

Pen bleeding
Forming into words
Words so sharp
Dripping with hatred
Summoned by
Feeling of betrayal
Outraged

 

Murderous thoughts surfaced
A better place
The world will be
Without them
And me

 

Killing them in my mind
Words dip in and out of their chests
Slicing, slaying
Blood, black as ink
Spouting
Staining the floor
On My hands
Dipping

 

I see nothing

 

Sanity is so fragile
A thin line separating sane and insane
Once crossed
Never the same

 

Cold- eyed murderer and gaping victims
Silently screaming
I am them
Both
Pen bleeding
Forming into words
 

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Excellent metaphor! An excellent piece of prose! Barbara

[James K. Blaylock]

Powerful piece! Although, I feel as though time can change us, if given half a chance.

jkb

[Dawn]

the words are fantastic, you dont need to use any others, a really great poem, lets you in to the mind if its writer.
Well done.

Keep Writing.
Dawn