Who am i...

Lately I've been wondering who I really am...

 

Who am I…

 

 

 

Sometimes I wonder who I really am…at my house I feel like I need to be this little servant for my little brother and mother that they see me to be, watch what I say, make sure to listen to what they say… but when I am with my friends that feels like the real me the one who likes to have fun who rather be with his friends then be with his “masters” waiting for him at home

 

 

 

Sometimes I wonder who I really am…when I am around my family I have to be this little perfect son that my mom like to show off to the world to show she is the perfect mom but when I am with my friends I could be the biggest mess up in the world or I could have done something illegal I know they would still love me

 

 

 

I feel like I am two different people or maybe more…I want to find the true me I don’t want to be this little servant I want to be the person I know I am deep inside of me

 

 

 

Who am I really…

Author's Note

My second poem I know I am bad at writing poem

Reviews

[Lora King]

you are not bad at writing poem's, I thought it was very heartfelt, and I completely related... I think you are well on your way my friend. Good Job... :-)

[Jonathan Biswell]

thanks ^.^

[Lora King]

not a problem... ;-)

[Penny]

Very nyc write. I also think like that sometimes. & to answer your question, you are both beccause you wont break rules with your friends if you didn't follow them at home & vice versa. Well done.

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem with pertinent questions...Bravo

[Jonathan Biswell]

thank you for reviewing

[Sami Khalil]

You are welocme...:)..............

[N!LoC]

i wouldnt go that far...... its bad.... but not horrible?!.... LOLOL.... IM JUST messing with ya biswell! lolol.... whatever writing u have.. just put it out there if u think its worth putting out for others to read...

[Jonathan Biswell]

this is the only place where I can vent this feeling so they wont get bottle up