Undead

This is a poem i threw together in a couple of hours for my English class.We could write about anything we wanted to.The only exceptions were that there had to be 16 lines and each line had to have 10 syllables.The format was abab, cdcd, efef, ghgh.

UNDEAD

You'll know when they come 'cause fears in my eyes

Undead come out to feed on ones alive

I watch the sun fade away from the sky

There's not many left except for us five

 

It's said that garlic stops them from coming

Garlics not working it's truly a lie

And when they come it's easy to succumb

To the fear that's inside, you might just die

 

To become one of them is a cursed life

So dont let them drink the blood from your neck

Because in your life there will be much strife

You will be a dead (not living) wreck

 

Better watch out 'cause they surely will bite

The only thing that kills them is the sun

You'll be safe if you don't come out at night

When the undead come you had better run

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[*Petitti*]

i like this poem wen u should read this one for english

[Samantha.]

i love it
i think it creates a scared vibe
i am truly amazed at this

[*Petitti*]

this poem is really good wen is this the oneu wrote for KUNIKs class

[Adela Muresan]

The terrifying evil in the night creates, the fear sensation you probably wanted to transmit.

Nice verse presentation.

A.M.