courage fail me

its a poem about life,somethings there is so many things i want to do,but i end up not doing them

I want to stop now,but my courage has failed me
I have so many things to say but it seems am voiceless
i have so many places to go,my feet refuse me steps
i have so many things to look at but my vision is blurred
i need inspiration but everything seems lonely

Author's Note

its a little thing i made up in haste,unedited.

Reviews

[Sangeetha]

this was a very powerful and relatable poem. I really agree with your opinion on this as well. it was a short and sweet poem that had a strong and simple messege i truly enjoyed it.

there does seem to be missing words sometimes in your poems, i assume that it could be typos or your finger slipped a key, but do be cautious of that because one word can change the meaning of your poem and potray a different message to the reader.

other than that i really like it. FULL RATINGS!!

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks friend i will work on my weakness,and also thanks for the full rating

[Sangeetha]

your welcome i think your choice in subject matter is excellent and i always do enjoy your poem im sure you'll have more great stuff coming along.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and strong words. Life is not easy. You must go forward even when you do not want. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks for the review and the kind word

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[SweetWriter88]

I like it, it's different. The flow is really good and I can feel the emotion. Well done!

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks frostyangel

[child of God]

Beautiful has a nice rythem to it short but so much emotion and power in so little words

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks child of God

[Nicole Schuster]

Beautiful in its simplicity. There's a feeling here that a lot of people can relate to - yearning for a sense of purpose or something to do, but not knowing where to look or how to find it. Nice job :)

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks friend

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Well! If you go to first and last line these are self contradictory, need I say anymore.

[Terrence Chang]

When courage fails all hopes is gone in vain. A good thought but lacked the execution. But overall a good read

[Adesanya Yewande]

Thanks i will work on that

[Autonomous]

Sometimes the simplest things in expressing yourself give a tale of great struggle and hope. This was a good one! Oh and as for the grammar, you might like Grammarly, if you install it then it will fix some of your grammar mistakes.

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks zwsed,is that grammarly an application ?

[Autonomous]

Yes it's an extension on google chrome. just look it up and it should be easy to find.

[Adesanya Yewande]

okay thanks for that

[hcarson]

I understand this one far too much but it does pass if you ppush yourself enough, lovely words :)

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks hcarson for the review

[Scarlet M.]

A very simple poem, indeed. The way you phrase your words were easy to understand, making the reader grasp a clear concept on what the writer is trying to say. All in all it was a good read! Thanks for sharing.

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks scarlet