if only

if only all my ifs could come true, if

If only you could love me for me
And not think of my appearance,
If only wishes are horse

And all my wishes granted

If only the world is not full of wickedness
Everyone kind and  gentle,
If only i can turn back the hand of time
I did correct all my mistakes

If only there is nothing like death
And we all live together forever,
If only people meant  what they say
Then they  wont be lie

If only i knew what my heart was telling me
Then i wouldn't make a  mistake
If only all the ifs are possible
If only.

Reviews

[Joe W]

The way that it was written, with the bold aspect, I found it hard to read but maybe that was just me. Other than that, it was well done.

[Inject Positivity]

Ah! the questions that we all have in our heart and mind at certain point of our life... but the sad part is that these ifs can never be true...very thought provoking write...

[Adesanya Yewande]

truly though provoking and sad that the ifs are never going to happen

[Tina H.W.]

Wow...Adesanya...the title grabbed my attention. It's a very powerful, moving poem that everyone can relate to. Who hasn't thought... "if only..." This is going to stay in my mind for a long time to come.
Lovely piece :)

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks tina for the amazing review

[Tina H.W.]

A pleasure! :)

[zunie frost]

I can personally relate to this
I love this poem
Very nicely written !!!!!
Keep it up

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks so much for the review zunie

[Sangeetha]

This ppem is very meaningful and you speak clearly if the desires everyone has...oh and btw this reminds if the sond if only by dove Cameron in the movie desecendants. Especially your last line.
Haha but nonetheless very well written keep it coming.

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks sangeetha

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful wishes and hope in the poetry.
"If only the world is not full of wickedness
Everyone kind and gentle,
If only i can turn back the hand of time
I did correct all my mistakes"
I have wished for the above wishes often in my life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks i also do have many wishes if only it could be granted i will be glad,but it seems impossible unless a miracle happen

[Coyote Poetry]

Can't give-up. Wishes can come true.

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

I wouldn't be the correct person to review because I myself struggle with longer versions of poems.
But the title was so wisely chosen. :)

[freaksheet]

It's beautiful. Very heartfelt and well-written.

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks for the review friend

[freaksheet]

No problem, friend!

[hcarson]

it would certainly be wonderful if all those 'if'ss' could come true wouldn't it, a lovely thought...maybe minus the death one..I'm already sick of myself..i couldn't deal with being stuck with me forever..neither could my partner haha...lovely flow of truths, a few errors but non that interferred with the flow or jist of the poetry for me, well done good work :)

[Adesanya Yewande]

really its funny to me that you are tired of yourself.

[hcarson]

i drive myself mad with all my moaning and whining haha...although i'm not ready to go yet got some more moaning to do first lol ;)