strange heart

its about feeling a way one has never felt before

    The moment i see you
    I feel the world come to a stop
    I thought this all a dream
    Until my heart starts beating fast
    What a strange heart

    The moment you left
    Everything seems empty and boring
    Who could explain whats happening
    It seems like a mystery
    What a strange heart

© 2016 Adesanya Yewande

Author's Note

This is my first ever poem. How is it ?

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Inject Positivity

It says truly what we feel when we are in love... our whole world stops for that one person and we give them our everything...but when they leave the part of us that gave it's everything to that one person gets broken into thousands of pieces and that is our strange heart.... first work with lot of maturity my frnd... full ratings...

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

thanks IP am speechless i don't know what to say

Naked Elements

what a strange heart.
Honestly, if all this poem said was "what a strange heart" it would speak more to me.
The heart is strange.
For example, just yesterday I saw a picture of my ex - girlfriend from like idk 5 years ago, and for a moment I still felt romantic love for her. Like really? Come on strange heart. Get over it! ha

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

really ? more like funny heart, i do fell that do whenever am chatting with my ex sometimes i feel t.. read more

freaksheet

This was your first poem? In that case, you've got a serious natural talent for poetry. This poem conveys how love feels perfectly! You're so happy when they're there, and it's just so empty when they aren't! You are a talented writer, and while short, this is one of the best poems I've seen here. keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

tanks a lot.i feel blessed with you review,so glad you love it and yes it was my first poem

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you're blessed by my review!

Ardra

Nice one :) ...heart has its own strange ways which we humans don't understand ...keep writing

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

thanks so much

9 Years Ago

Hmmmm, dats true

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Added on March 14, 2016
Last Updated on March 14, 2016
Tags: feeling, love

Author

Adesanya Yewande

lagos, epe, Nigeria

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am a young lady who loves to read and write,i feel in reading you get to learn much and know more than you have ,and in writing you get to express your feelings and let out your inner though about lif.. more..