Guardian angel

Guardian angel

A Chapter by Tayler Voteary
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Peace full story then BAM plot twist

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As I exited the in I felt a warm breeze brush past me and I thought to myself " its a lovely day out today ", then suddenly like ghost popped out James along with clover. " hello again" she said in a most cheerful tone, "oh hello you guys" I replied happily and we conversed for a few minutes about ourselves. James smiled "by the way, I never asked your name" just then I realized I never really thought about it, and then it hit me and almost unconsciously I said "Adam", James smiled " well OK then" shall we go? He asked. We walked past numerous shops and other buildings until we passed a jeweler and clover shouted " hey lets see it there's anything good in there" James looked at me as if for confirmation and I shrugged so we entered browsing through necklaces, rings, and bracelets when I saw a small silver ring with an emerald stone in the center and I stopped to study it when James walked up and asked if I was OK, "yes" I replied, " it's just that the ring looks just like Lilly the maids", James looked in confusion "who?" He asked, " Lilly, the one who was cleaning up when you came to check on me," I said with confusion. "That's strange," he said, "what am I asked" James looked at me with concern "the inn doesn't have a maid". It was then I realized the fact that Lilly's skin was unnaturally cold, James then called for a closer. She rushed over to us and we ran to the inn and into the inn keepers study, " what's wrong" the old man yelled with concern in his voice, " do you know if there is a new maid named Lilly?" He asked with fear and concern in his tone the innkeeper looked concerned "no why" I became a little scared "then who was serving me?" Just than clover began to become very uneasy "she kept her promise, why?" She said, tears trickling down her cheeks, "what is it, who is she" I asked, " do you know how you got here?" I tried to remember but I couldn't I shook my head, "we found you in the rain covered in blood and brushes" she cried. "What does that have to do with this," James asked, "I'm not a child. Not even close I'm actually a couple hundred years old as is Collin we don't age"  She said "that's insane" I said "it's true" said Collin entering holding a wood box "we've been. Alive for a long time and have been hiding in disguise" Collin undid a tiny necklace from his neck and clover took off her ring just then the room filled with light. Upon its dimming, the twins were replaced with two people roughly the same age as me Collin was much taller and his hair was quite long, and clover was also taller and her hair almost doubled in length. " wow" I said and looked at James who wasn't surprised. " OK but what does that have to do with lily,? " James asked, " this isn't weird to you? " asked James looked and shrugged " I knew already. Anyway, what does that have to do with Lilly?" Clover looked with sadness "her names Elizabeth and she died almost a hundred years ago" she sat down took the box from collie and opened it inside was a picture of her in a nurses uniform and next to her was Lilly but she was cut and burnt. " I worked for the army treating victims of the attacks on spiritual and was assigned to her she was burned when she tried to rescue her grandmother from a burning house, her last words were ill return one day when I'm needed" "and I did" said Elizabeth who was standing in the doorway we all looked up and I ran over and felt her hands, cold and pale " so you're a ghost " I said she smiled and laughed "in a sense, but I'm not haunting you, I'm more like a guardian angel" "I guess we should talk to the village medium and see what she thinks" James said "I just have one question why the suicide attempt if you're a ghost" I asked "oh that was a dream I gave you as a way for our souls to bond" I replied " makes sense " Elizabeth turned and said" as for the medium I think it's a great idea plus it might tell us who Adam lets go" We got up and left and as we left I heard the in keeper say " did those two kids just transform, I must be going mad" and headed out for the medium.


© 2016 Tayler Voteary


Author's Note

Tayler Voteary
Probably going to be alot of gramar issues I typed it on my cell sry plus its like midnight and I'm kinda tired so again sry

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lmao i just relized my spell checker kinda recked some of the words


Posted 8 Years Ago


Dude, you should really make more. I loved this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Again nice. Plus this plot is really interesting, I'm looking forward to more :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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