A Tale begins

the story begins here

"keep running" i screamed were almost there, but before i could turn to look back i noticed the ground beneath my feet begin to crumble. within an instant i began to fall, i kept falling for what felt like forever until i saw the hard ground get closer and closer until SMASH. i woke up on the floor of my home "just another nightmare" i said to myself over and over until i could stop hyperventilating. "is everything OK up there i herd a bang" my grandmother said from downstairs, "im fine i just fell off my bed" i yelled back.

i came downstairs to find a sweet smell in the air, ah my favorite, elvish bread. i sat down to eat when i herd a thud outside the door i sprung up and swung the door open to see the body of a man with an arrow in his back, "oh my god" i whispered as i looked at the horror that lay upon the town of Spiritvale. fire and blood engulfed the entire village, knights dressed all in black where slaughtering everyone in their path, than i saw an arrow fly at my head just as it hit me i woke up. the sweet smell of elvish bread still there my grandma just sipping her tea. i looked out the window the village was perfectly normal, "you dosed off dear are you OK? " my grandma asked with concern in her voice, "im alright" i replied. "after breakfast would you please go down to the market and pick up milk?" she asked "alright i replied", so after breakfast i left for the market. on the way there i stopped to see the pond and all of the beautiful scenery that the village had to offer, considering what happened in my dream things seamed so much nicer. i arrived at the market and found the milk man and obtained the rather large canister of milk."thank you very much" said the lady behind the stand, i nodded my head and began to walk back when a bright light appeared in the sky. with a flash the sky turned black and fire began to burn the whole village my dream was coming to life. i ran to my house to see it completely engulfed in flames,"grandma" i screamed and bolted into the house, i looked everywhere until i found her under a beam of wood. i tried to pull her out but she was pinned down just then i saw the roof collapse and everything went black. 

Reviews

[Kousika]

Hey great story man.. It looks like a child narrates the story with such an awesome feel..
Keep going and touch the stars.. :))