Please talk.

4 years 6 months and 9 days left

Talk to me my love.
Of all your wants
your desires
your likes
your satisfactions
the things that you crave for

oh, talk to me my love
your fears
your anger
your sorrows
for what your eyes tear for

oh talk to me my love
of anything
The current events
science
religion
ethics
your personal views and perspectives in life
the wonders of your mind

oh talk to me my love
though I don’t have a penny
for those thoughts
just my ears,
for I have listened to your heart
with the wind and birds floating
with trees dancing and while the sky moves
I have heard it.

oh, talk to me my love
of what music lingers inside your heart.
I’ am curious to know
for mine beats your name

Reviews

[zunie frost]

Great poetry ..... Love reading it

[maria ( rose)]

oh, talk to me my love
of what music lingers inside your heart.
I’ am curious to know
for mine beats your name..aww adore this one!

[Wem Ortiz]

thank you maria ;)

[maria ( rose)]

you're welcome:)

[BlakeAshton]

Definitely a fan. The flow could still use a bit of touching up IMO, but the concepts and the word choice are superb.