Empty

Empty

A Poem by Wem Ortiz
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I was once left in an empty faith

Not until you lead me out of my empty grave

Showed me life, and told me I don’t have an empty fate

Filled me joy and spread them lightly into my empty face

Painted colors into my empty canvas

Build loyalty back into my empty trust

And in years we removed problems and left with an empty baggage

And in years to come we'll both travel, filling in things that we need on our empty luggage

But why all of a sudden, you had become empty inside?

And decide that you’ll empty your mind?

Then throw me into an empty space

Leave me into an empty state

It seems that we became empty with our empathy

Now were back to becoming totally empty. 

© 2015 Wem Ortiz


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Emptiness is a very sad state of void and hopelessness. You have described it wonderfully. Thank you for sharing....:).......

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Wem Ortiz
Wem Ortiz

Bacolod, Negros Occidental, Philippines



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