Yours truly.

Yours truly.

A Poem by Wem Ortiz
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4 years 6 months and 17 days left

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In minutes you have made me yours.
in minutes I find joy in your face
in just a minute it becomes a day.
the gladness in your eyes
as if heaven was there.
I don’t want the moment to end.


I wrapped my arms as you requested for it.
Embraced you calmly with my spirit while my head was
hooking down through your shoulders, gripping our bodies together
It was very slow, as if people were immobile around us,
as if it was only you and me.

Walking away I called you once, 
you look back and I silently speak my words of love for you
you smiled,  and that smile was so genuine 
that it melted my heart with an angel’s laughter
and even if you didn’t reply back
 it remained inside me until you faded into the crowd.

I said to myself I am yours . . .


yet you are not mine.


 

 

© 2015 Wem Ortiz


Author's Note

Wem Ortiz
ignore grammar problems, what do you think of the dialogue, etc.

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Sad and hurtful feelings at the same time. I feel the sincerity of this love. Bravo.......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

" YET YOU ARE NOT MINE" that line damn. I hate that line haha!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Wem Ortiz
Wem Ortiz

Bacolod, Negros Occidental, Philippines



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