No one can stop her

No one can stop her

A Poem by Wem Ortiz
"

a wife caught her husband cheating

"

It started with an emotion rushing towards her
fear shredding her well-being, perhaps anger  flared to upraised
she was on her higher state of being.
She breathes deeply getting ready to begin her move

 

As she grabs a cold glass of rum then breaks it
shattering the glasses, forming  sharp edges
it was deadly, heavy tears were swiftly dripping down
an excess of emotions touching her cheeks erupting from her watery eyes


She diminished thy self to emptiness
as empty as a well-cleaned bottle.
She has no sense, no one can stop her.
as she sees his back moves swiftly caressing another.


she shouted at him once, she runs reaching him then stabbed him to death
she crawls and reached the other  smashing her to the floor
it was soundless, it was a silent , a slaughter
hitting the vital parts, as I've said it was soundless,
no one can stop her ... 


and the director says cut.

 

© 2013 Wem Ortiz


Author's Note

Wem Ortiz
ignore grammar problems, :)

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Phenomenal poetry here...I love his the story unfolds and ends...sublime inking.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This gives such a mental picture, it's as if I'm watching it all unfold front row seating, great work

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Wem Ortiz
Wem Ortiz

Bacolod, Negros Occidental, Philippines



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