Maybe in another universe

I can still feel your hands

on my skin

and the question

echoes in my head

maybe in another universe

you didn't take

my last shred of hope from me

maybe in another universe

I'll be okay

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

There seem to be a lot of those other universes, locations where the show went as planned. I say keep trying until this universe works right.

[Vol]

Blue,
Now THAT's a quality whine... sorrow expressed without all the purple emotions and teardrops...
Vol

[tumi]

your poem is emotional to be honest
it feel as though we wish for the same person who hurt you would love you in another word
a lovely writing