Haunted (Half a man)

Haunted (Half a man)

A Poem by bluesaturn

She left me
broken
on my bathroom floor.
And I don't know
how to love someone
who is less 
than half a man.
Because she left him
broken
somewhere too. 
And I wish I could
love you
in the way 
you want.
I wish I could hold you
when you fall apart
and not care
that you hurt me,
like a broken man. 
But she haunts 
every corner of this house,
that she never stepped foot into,
and all my dreams, my hopes, my love - 
they're haunted too. 
I'm far too haunted
to love somebody, 
who is less than
half a man,
back together again. 

© 2023 bluesaturn


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This is a bit confusing. Hmm? Not critiquing but it could use some revising.

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Added on October 30, 2023
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