(74) Pseudo Heart

 

Watch out!, she's coming for you.
I'm so sorry, there's no escape now;
Especially as she has you in her sights.
You're hers, to do with as she wants;
A prisoner to her pseudo heart.

You think that you can control her;
You have to know you have that wrong.
What ever she wants, she always gets;
Because with her body you are enticed.
She has you now, with her pseudo heart.

I loved her once, but then I fell.
She took me and drained me of all I had;
Then she cast me out and left me to rot.
I know it was a mistake for she couldn't love.
For there is nothing left inside her pseudo heart.


copyright Chris Smith 2011

Reviews

[V.B.]

I am enormously jealous of the title "Pseudo Heart." Wish I had come up with that.

Having learned that these are being posted in an order, and we're less than a third of the way through, I can only imagine the quality of the s**t we're gonna be seeing when we get towards 300. Thanks Chris.

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Very nice

[Judy Ponceby]

Fantastic. She sounds a brutal horrid wench!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is jaw dropping work.
I swear I think I know her!

[Ashley]

excellent write! loved it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Chris! This is excellent, I swear each time I read something of yours your skills are getting better and better!

[Hayley]

Love the title and the theme of your poem! It is perfectly constructed. Intro, body, and conclusion. Nice!!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow! great concept! wish i would have thought of it first!

[Hello, Goodbye]

easy flow and clear direction.. good brevity readin'.

[Hatchling]

nicely written

[darkness*star1985]

nice write, very neat. some woman hold the power to a man by there bodys like a blade to there neck. Good job