(65) Vampire Lover

Coming of the children of the night
Sing songs and hidden from sight
Wolves that are running free
Hiding where we do not see

He will be there in the dark
Waiting to leave his mark
She has come, so willing
He is not here for any killing

He just wants to taste her life
Bite with fangs like a knife
Drink from her, she feels no pain
Blood flows from the vein

He will never hurt her
He will never desert her
He wants her to be immortal
Wishes her to love him eternal

She believes this vampire, he exists
But now vanished into the mists
He must be gone before sun light
But will be her vampire lover comes the night


copyright Chris Smith 2008

Author's Note

An old poem from 2007 but revised 2008.

Reviews

[emona]

i can actually relate to this

[Stef Outsiders]

I love vampire's, this is dark and seductive... brilliant write!

[FJ Davis]

Dark little number that hits all the classic notes.
Good woek, Chris.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Dark , morbidly seductive are the vampires.
This is very interesting, well written.
I like the vampire lore and poetry and of course-
True Blood-

Chloe

[Angela]

could turn this into a grouping. Interesting

[Brianna Brie]

Awe...now there in lies the appeal of vampires. To be loved for eternity. Nice write!

[Magdelena]

Now you know I like this type of write.. It was fab! I loved the images that came to mind.. Hey, maybe a sequel to this? Would be interesting.. Nicely done

Mags xx

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Considering I love vampires, I absolutely ADORE this poem. AMAZING