(64) Irish Maiden I Dream Of Thee

Why am I in love with thee?

My fair maiden, so far, awaits;

I crave to feel thy sweet kiss,

To taste those tender of lips.

Embrace the heart in thy breast;

Hold thee close to my body.

To never to let you go.

We will make love on this night;

When we visit together in our dreams.

Thy gentle hearts touches my soul;

For if reality I will be without ye,

Then from this dream let me never awake.




copyright Chris Smith 2009

Author's Note

Written for someone very special.

Reviews

[Rachel]

the tone is very well placed but if you are going to use an "irish" or old english style continue with it throughout the poem; now you have a combination of modern and old enligsh perhaps a touch of the "irish" way of speaking english but overall this piece is very sincere and perfect with the content :)

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Amazing flow man :)
I found this poem very relatable :)
Your vocabulary couldn't have been better :)

[Arabdha]

i'm certain the 'someone' will be very pleased..this is lovely :)

[Tommy]

I have had that dream...It can be a tear jerker when we suddenly wake and find ourselves back in reality...

Nice Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Sukriti Suki]

from this dream let me never awake....the virtual is so more often than not better than the real...wonderful.

[A.Noel]

beautiful and romantic :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

awww... incredibly sweet!

[Robin]

wistful longing with lingering sentiment ~

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Very special indeed! So sweet and succinct a write.
Light,
Siddartha