(61) Man In The Moon

(61) Man In The Moon

A Poem by Chris Smith Welshpoetcs

Looking up at the night sky
I see the Moon looking back
There is a face smiling at me
With the stars shining around

The man in the Moon has no troubles
He has no need to pay the bills everyday
He never goes hungry and never worries
At night, when you need him, he's there

The man in the Moon will never judge you
He will listen to the words you share
Never answers you back or puts you down
He always lends a shoulder for you to cry

Looking up at the night sky
I see the Moon looking back
There is a face smiling at me
Now I know I am smiling too



copyright Chris Smith 2011

© 2011 Chris Smith Welshpoetcs


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Chris Smith Welshpoetcs
When the light of the Moon guides you.

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"The man in the Moon has no troubles
He has no need to pay the bills everyday
He never goes hungry and never worries
At night, when you need him, he's there"

I wish that such a paradise was found daily! This stanza made me really float away from my problems and just drift into utter relaxation and calm. This piece is absolutely excellent my friend! Glad i've had the chance to read it Today!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The was a peaceful calming poem to read, a great enjoyable read. You can always count on the man in the moon!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"The man in the Moon has no troubles
He has no need to pay the bills everyday
He never goes hungry and never worries
At night, when you need him, he's there"

I wish that such a paradise was found daily! This stanza made me really float away from my problems and just drift into utter relaxation and calm. This piece is absolutely excellent my friend! Glad i've had the chance to read it Today!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What an excellent poem. I've always loved moon poems and this one is so perfect! Definitely a favorite.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the idea and the poem. "The man in the Moon will never judge you"... a bit like those invisible best friends we have when we're young... 'cept they always let us win every game too!


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write Chris, cool expression of the contant natural backdrop to our ever-changing lives - feel the same about the Sun and the sea in my hometown.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful poem.Who is the happy man on the man.It may be your fantasy
yoursJVL

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this...its actualy something i consider theraputic,watching the moon and geting lost in it..beautiful!:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soul touching... i love this

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ah, the reflective qualities of the moon ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This also gives me a warm light inside...I think I'll smile at the moon too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chris Smith Welshpoetcs
Chris Smith Welshpoetcs

Cardiff until 2004, then Hemel Hempstead, Hertfordshire, United Kingdom



About
Started writing in 1997 after a horrible attack, I found it theraputic and wrote a range of poems and short horror stories. Started sharing on the Web firstly with Yahoo 360 in 2005, then sites on .. more..

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