(50) Neva Flores

Written in 2010 for my special friend

Never has such a beautiful heart
Ever been beating, never apart
Visions of perfection in a friend
Always there, to care and tend

Few will see, how special you are
Love you give that is felt from afar
Only you, make us alive, make us pure
Relaxing us with words, true and sure
Each time you visit, is a special day
Showing sweet harmony in our own way

Reviews

[Rachel]

beautiful words , beautiful story , beautiful love in this piece .... however again i think the flow is chopped by certain lines one of them being : "only you, make us alive, make us pure" ... the prose is fantastic and beautiful but the rhythym of a poem is what makes it more than just prose it makes it an art , a piece of poetry

[Helen]

I agree :-) wonderful words for a very special lady. She more than deserves them ;-)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

what a sweet a beautiful poem written for someone you love! :)

[Lilly Negoi]

what a splendid tribute!! she is indeed a marvelous person and worthy of each of your written words here and more :).

[SpokenWord]

A wonderful dedication to a wonderful spirit. Well done.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I feel really stupid, I did not even look at the title of this poem but should have recognized it. I think perhaps I have read and commented way too much today but why stop now. Love ya Chris!

[Judy Ponceby]

What a beautiful poem, for a lovely kind lady, we all admire :)

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Wow..I really like this one. Nicely done, my friend