(50) Neva Flores

Written in 2010 for my special friend

Never has such a beautiful heart
Ever been beating, never apart
Visions of perfection in a friend
Always there, to care and tend

Few will see, how special you are
Love you give that is felt from afar
Only you, make us alive, make us pure
Relaxing us with words, true and sure
Each time you visit, is a special day
Showing sweet harmony in our own way

Reviews

[Rachel]

beautiful words , beautiful story , beautiful love in this piece .... however again i think the flow is chopped by certain lines one of them being : "only you, make us alive, make us pure" ... the prose is fantastic and beautiful but the rhythym of a poem is what makes it more than just prose it makes it an art , a piece of poetry

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

An acrostic poem for my friend, the first letters of each line spell out her name.

[Hayley]

Your words have a dream like quality to them that make this poem flow. I really feel the admiration you have.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Delightful ode to a dear friendship...a thoroughly enjoyable read! Thanks.
Light,
Siddartha

[Lily Mae]

So true for us all. We are truely blessed :) xx Great tribute write for a dear friend..xxx

[Ashley]

this is a truly beautiful piece on friendship. such a delicate and broad subject, yet you've conveyed the depth of a special relationship with such few words. very well done.

[Sunni Davis]

Your words are so beautiful and sweet. Great poem!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

now that is the kind of friend we would all be quite fortunate to know~ sweet writing~smooth and tranquil~

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Wow this was amazing
Very beautiful

[M.Babu]

"Few will see, how special you are
Love you give that is felt from afar
Only you, make us alive, make us pure
Relaxing us with words, true and sure
Each time you visit, is a special day..."
Word perfect stanza!!! Nicely described and well articulated Chris. Very very poignantly lovely piece and an extremely great tribute

[Arabdha]

this is so awesome..!! i don't know Neva personally,but as a writer i'm a fan of her work and can say that she is an amazing person..that reflects in her poems..this is a really sweet thing to do for someone you so admire..i loved it..way to go !