Never has such a beautiful heart Ever been beating, never apart Visions of perfection in a friend Always there, to care and tend
Few will see, how special you are Love you give that is felt from afar Only you, make us alive, make us pure Relaxing us with words, true and sure Each time you visit, is a special day Showing sweet harmony in our own way
beautiful words , beautiful story , beautiful love in this piece .... however again i think the flow is chopped by certain lines one of them being : "only you, make us alive, make us pure" ... the prose is fantastic and beautiful but the rhythym of a poem is what makes it more than just prose it makes it an art , a piece of poetry
beautiful words , beautiful story , beautiful love in this piece .... however again i think the flow is chopped by certain lines one of them being : "only you, make us alive, make us pure" ... the prose is fantastic and beautiful but the rhythym of a poem is what makes it more than just prose it makes it an art , a piece of poetry
You chose well, Chris, whom to praise. Neva is not only poetry royalty, she is a magically wonderful and exquisitely sensitive human being; possessive of--as I recently told her--unerring good taste.
Great subject; great poem.
You know I have just come to know Neva, but she does seem like a delight both in compassionate words she shares in tribute to our own little submission, but more so with her delightful expression of written words.
Cardiff until 2004, then Hemel Hempstead, Hertfordshire, United Kingdom
About
Started writing in 1997 after a horrible attack, I found it theraputic and wrote a range of poems and short horror stories.
Started sharing on the Web firstly with Yahoo 360 in 2005, then sites on .. more..