(47) I Am Batman

I patrol in my backyard,
Cruising im my pedal car.
I can see the Joker.
Well, it's really a toy clown;
Locked safely away in the toy shed.

I am looking for Two Face,
A teddybear that my dog ripped.
So my Mum sewed up his face.
But now he is out there, free;
I must track him down.

I search for him in the kitchen,
There I spot the Scarecrow.
It is a puppet, long and thin.
I must stop in my search now,
So I can tackle with my foe.

I put the Scarecrow behind bars.
My search continues, relentless!
I see Two Face hiding in the lounge;
I now creep up, slowly behind him.
I pounce, the battle is long, but I win.

That scarred teddybear is put away,
Where he won't harm anymore toys.
My Batcave awaits, up in my bedroom.
I am sleepy, my eyes are feeling tired.
I am Batman, even I must sleep!





copyright Chris smith 2010

Reviews

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I liked this poem as batman is my favourite vigilante
I really enjoyed the innocence to this poem

I wrote a poem about batman I hope you may read and review

called darkness is as clear as daylight

heres the link

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/%7BA%7Dshley-%7BB%7Dlack/692806/

great poem loved the flow and your story telling ability 100/100 from me

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

enchanting childhood of rich imaginings~ playful and delightful composition~

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

This very Simon Armitage :)
Which is a good thing,
He wrote a poem about Robin fighting back and telling batman to screw himself

[M.Babu]

fun to read and i drift into a few of my childhood daydreams and fantasies:0
The last stanza just did it for me.

[Lilly Negoi]

the sweetness of children imagination...:)...

[kasanova]

childhood! :D

[Hayley]

This was a fun read! I like the interpretation of you being Batman in real life, relating the people in the comic/movie to everyday life.

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Very well done, my friend.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great imagination!

[Judy Ponceby]

This is awesome!! :) You captured the imagination of children so well! :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This makes me wonder where Jack went :( love this Chris