(44) Love Me Five Times

Love me one time,
I will give you tonight.
Where we will fan the flames,
And we will feed our passion.

Love me two times,
I will take you to Heaven.
We will dance amongst the clouds,
And we will be lost in the moment.

Love me three times,
I will reach up to the very stars.
Bring down the Moon just for you,
And we will embrace in cosmic magic.

Love me four times,
I will surrender you my heart.
You will lock it away with yours,
And we will be kept forever safe.

Love me five times,
I will unite our souls together.
Our world will then become as one,
And then our love shall never die.



copyright Chris Smith 2011

Reviews

[Ashley]

i have to say, that initially, i clicked this because i have a weak spot for jim morrison and the doors. but i'm quite glad i read it. the progression is built well, and the pace is relaxed and sensual, which is appropriate given the romantic nature of the poem. very much enjoyed it.

[Bridgid Persephone Newm..]

That is quite impressive.

[Sukriti Suki]

quite a nice build up..simple and beautiful.

[Sunni Davis]

I'm a hopeless romantic and this poem has me sighing dreamily. Its so sweet and tender. Simply beautiful.