(25) Life Is...

Life is....
What we make it
Not wanting to break it
Some need to forsake it

Life is....
Knowing that I need you
Trying to make it true
Made by everything I do

Life is....
Never what we think
Can drive us to drink
Sometimes into it we sink

Life is....
Believing there is something above
When push comes to shove
In the end, life is love

copyright Chris Smith 2011

Reviews

[Aurora Lynn]

Very good poem! I like how your story flows from beginning to end, and the rhyming was good as well. I don't usually write very good rhyming poems, but you seem to do it naturally!

I truely believe that life is all of that, and so much more. My favorite line would have to be 'Life is..../Believing there is something above/When push comes to shove/In the end, life is love' Not only does it sum up the whole poem that, like the rest of the poem, is so true.

A very good read. Thank you so much for writing!

[Julie Beth]

this is really good great job :)

[Omar Fendri]

simple and inspiring... aesthetic and creative...all in all, i like it :)

[Liz]

Love love love this. An awesome outlook on life. The ending is fantastic.

[kasanova]

I really like the 3rd stanza.. Can TOTALLY relate. End is great too.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Your last line sums everything up. Yes! Life is love!10