(8) Seesaw

(8) Seesaw

A Poem by Chris Smith Welshpoetcs

Sometimes going up
Sometimes going down
When do we have enough
When do we lose our crown

Funny riding the Seesaw
Enjoying our childhood
Never seeing life takes more
Never seeing what our eyes should

Sometimes going high
Sometimes going low
We never reach that sky
Life keeps on getting slow

Funny riding the Seesaw
The only thing we can do
Never certain for sure
What we are going through



copyright Chris Smith
2011

© 2011 Chris Smith Welshpoetcs


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Well said my friend .. well said ...

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Very well written !!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i guess life is all ups and downs chris. a nicely written analogy. good one, my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And aint that the truth lol We can only join in on the ebb and flow of life, I like the seesaw as a meataphor love xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 10, 2011
Last Updated on March 31, 2011
Tags: life

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Chris Smith Welshpoetcs
Chris Smith Welshpoetcs

Cardiff until 2004, then Hemel Hempstead, Hertfordshire, United Kingdom



About
Started writing in 1997 after a horrible attack, I found it theraputic and wrote a range of poems and short horror stories. Started sharing on the Web firstly with Yahoo 360 in 2005, then sites on .. more..

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