Panic Attack

I can feel it move

as if it were a living thing

taking hold of my body

My heart beast faster, FASTER

pulsing blood rushes

my head POUNDING

swirling 

spinning

"you are going to die"

"your heart is sure to fail"

"you are going mad" 

Thoughts with no control

eager to maintain the panic

Should I let is take me?

Surrender to it?

Become its slave?

Hell no!

I''M OKAY

I'M okay

i'm okay

Tranquility 

Reviews

[Virdie Morrison]

There are a few corrections that need to be made but overall you did a good job. You've done a fabulous job describing the roller-coaster that is a panic attack. Also, I think your formatting was a good choice. It fits the tone of your work.
Line 4: "beast" (beats)
Line 14: "is" (it)
Line 18: I''m (I'm)
Line 20: i'm (I'm)

[Amber Weldon]

Thank you for your help! :)

[SonOfPlunder]

Well said, this is something we all go through

[Roger Turgeon]

Great ride from darkness into light. One note: the line beginning Should I ....the word you need is "it" not "is"

[Amber Weldon]

Thank you :)

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