Autumn Turns to Snow

Autumn Turns to Snow

 

The early morning smoke and haze

Seeps through autumn's final days.

The leaves are gold for another day,

Then they fall and blow away.

 

When the season is no more,

I shall remember its hue upon my door.

The season I long to know,

The season turns to snow.

 

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beatifully written, The imagery is so stunning that i could see the leaves turning colors as Autumn comes, and then magically as Autumn leaves Winter rushes in with snow! Excellent reading!

[Seshat Nidaba]

You should totally complete this, it just dying for 2 more stanzas, I can feel it!

The first stanza was very Keatian. Well done, it's feels like romantic nature poetry.