Our Snow Cabin - A Collaboration
A Poem by Vladislav Raven
 The snow is falling and two Lovers are together. How the cooling snow can fan the flame of Love. 
 Our Snow Cabin. A Collaboration. By, Veronique Raven. & Vladislav Raven.
Cozy by the warm glow of the fireplace In our cabin 'neath the pine so tall, My darlin' Love and i watch downy snowflakes through frosty windowpane fall. In the velvet darkness of night the silence deafening In the winter wonderland so white,
As Ice crystals softly glisten and sparkle like tiny diamonds blanketing the ground tonight.
Holding close together before the firelight's warm casting glow,
Our silouettes flicker on the wall while outside gently falls virgin snow.
The warmest glow within our hearts we kiss Love's sweetest wine,
Together before our cozy fire on this winter's night divine.
A Collaboration by Veronique Raven & Vladislav Raven.
© 2015 Vladislav Raven
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A beautiful poem my dear friends. I know the snow is near to both your hearts and your words as always blend so harmoniously creating a soft gentle picture, of two people sharing their love in such a beautiful romantic setting.
Love to you both
Dory xxxx
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Hi my Friend Dory, thanks for dropping by and the comment. Veronique and myself are happy to see you.. read moreHi my Friend Dory, thanks for dropping by and the comment. Veronique and myself are happy to see you here. Snow, snow, snow, we all may get something different from the sight but the Love of the scene is there. Somehow the snow brings such peace into any scene of Love, it totally enhances the moment. So glad too see you here my friend.
MKE. XXX
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9 Years Ago
I am happy to be back with my friends. Thank you for asking me to join you here
Love from the.. read moreI am happy to be back with my friends. Thank you for asking me to join you here
Love from the little blue fishy
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9 Years Ago
My Friend, Aphrodite, the little blue fishy and The Dark Man, what a team. Hear my friend, just writ.. read moreMy Friend, Aphrodite, the little blue fishy and The Dark Man, what a team. Hear my friend, just write from your heart, that you are really good at. Forms will come but just start by writing from your heart, because, believe me, it is there the sun comes from. It shall help you my friend. Once more, great to see you here.
MIKE. XXX
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A beautiful poem my dear friends. I know the snow is near to both your hearts and your words as always blend so harmoniously creating a soft gentle picture, of two people sharing their love in such a beautiful romantic setting.
Love to you both
Dory xxxx
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Hi my Friend Dory, thanks for dropping by and the comment. Veronique and myself are happy to see you.. read moreHi my Friend Dory, thanks for dropping by and the comment. Veronique and myself are happy to see you here. Snow, snow, snow, we all may get something different from the sight but the Love of the scene is there. Somehow the snow brings such peace into any scene of Love, it totally enhances the moment. So glad too see you here my friend.
MKE. XXX
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9 Years Ago
I am happy to be back with my friends. Thank you for asking me to join you here
Love from the.. read moreI am happy to be back with my friends. Thank you for asking me to join you here
Love from the little blue fishy
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9 Years Ago
My Friend, Aphrodite, the little blue fishy and The Dark Man, what a team. Hear my friend, just writ.. read moreMy Friend, Aphrodite, the little blue fishy and The Dark Man, what a team. Hear my friend, just write from your heart, that you are really good at. Forms will come but just start by writing from your heart, because, believe me, it is there the sun comes from. It shall help you my friend. Once more, great to see you here.
MIKE. XXX
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Beautiful indeed. Very nice.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Hi Alex, thanks for dropping by and the comment, we much appreciate it. Veronique and i both have a .. read moreHi Alex, thanks for dropping by and the comment, we much appreciate it. Veronique and i both have a Love of the snow, the peace, tranquility. This Love had to lead to a collab. We enjoyed doing this one. It was a pleasure to work with Veronique. We both like to write from the heart. Again, thanks for dropping by. Your Friend always....Vladislav.
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A beautiful poem. You create place and good situation. Your strong description create good visions and left the reader with a positive ending and poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Hi my Friend, thanks for dropping by and the comment, much appreciated. I always find it very enjoya.. read moreHi my Friend, thanks for dropping by and the comment, much appreciated. I always find it very enjoyable and indeed a great pleasure to do collabs with Veronique. Her gentle style makes it so easy. We enjoy letting the heart's words on to the page. We appreciate you dropping by. Your Friend....Vladislav.
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9 Years Ago
You both are talented. Easy to read and grasp.
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This is one of my favorite collabs Vladislav because as you know I so adore the beautiful downy snow so very much just as you enjoy it's beauty.You also know i love the pic of the log cabin because of the one my lil' granny had when i was growing up when i used to visit her every weekend in the hills of West Virginia.Love always Veronique xxx
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Veronique, it was enjoyable writing this collab with you for as you say, we do have such a gentle Lo.. read moreVeronique, it was enjoyable writing this collab with you for as you say, we do have such a gentle Love for the snow. I tried to find my other snow cabin pic for you but i couldn't. An honour and a joy always, doing these collabs with you. Your hearts always sings so gently, it makes things so easy for me. Love always....Vladislav. XXX
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Added on May 16, 2015
Last Updated on May 16, 2015
Tags: Dream, Night, Love, Snow
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Vladislav RavenCowdenbeath, Fife, United Kingdom
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Love to write poetry, just to feel the emotions as the words come onto the page and sometimes know i have helped a few readers feel as they read the piece. It is my way of communicating. I spend most .. more..
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