Butterflies on the Vine

Deep green, dark purple

Mixed with fluttering yellow

Define the vineyard

The butterflies land

Ride the vines as though they were

Birds on power lines

Watching as callous, course 

Rough fingers pluck fresh ripe grapes 

Ready for their wine

Reviews

[Ruth]

Shimmering piece :) The whole atmosphere here is a wonderful calm and serene beauty :)

[Jesse W.]

Vineyards can be very calm places :) Thanks for the review!

[richieb]

Nothing as relaxing and mesmerizing as watching butterflies. Nice gentle poem. Fluttering butterflies to callous rough fingers, clever blend of images. Enjoyed it. Richie B.100

[Jesse W.]

In my mind, I was picturing the vineyard at Biltmore in North Carolina. When I went there, there were butterflies all around and it made a beautiful picture. :) Thanks for the review!

[Emily]

Love it!
I really like how you started it!
Keep it up!!

[Jesse W.]

Thank you Emily!