At the Party

At the Party

A Chapter by Emily Weaver

      They walked through the doors and into the party. They saw dancing and drinking and so much other stuff.

      Julia shrunk into Alex. He chuckled and slowly put his arm around her waist.

      Claudia looked at Aaron and noticed there was something sticking out at the bottom of his pants.

      “Are you wearing jeans under that?” Claudia asked, shocked.

      Aaron shushed her and smiled.

      Claudia laughed and squeezed his hand.

      “Hey, you want to go somewhere more private?” Alex asked Julia.

      Julia nodded, and he led her upstairs.



© 2011 Emily Weaver


Author's Note

Emily Weaver
See? I told you. My chapters are going to get shorter and shorter. Sorry about that. That is just my style, I guess.

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I have to be honest that this feels like more of a short story than a novel. Not much is happening within a chapter. I suggest putting some more action within one. Will be reading some more to know about the characters. For now, I like Claudia. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Emily Weaver
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My name is Emily and I love to read romance novels... So that is a lot of what I write. I have been wanting to be a writer for a couple of years now because I just have such a strong interest in it. (.. more..

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