Affirmation

Affirmation

A Poem by LoLo
"

A morning of bliss..I was lucky to have

"

I can feel the earth breathing

Her heartbeat,  thundering

The sun slowly rising

Soft and delicate

Glowing pastels along the tree line

"I can sense your greatness....

your astronomical beauty...

your boundless love."

The sky opening it's endless arms

To aid me in a deeper healing

The wind crisp and alive

A tranquil feather brushing my face

I wait for the pomagranate sun to break

And watch the graceful rays

Shoot like wild fire across the horizon

This day is more special than the last

Because I am alive

I have another chance

For each new sunrise is a new beginning

Each day

A gift

Every ocean, river, lake, or stream

Every mountain, valley, cliff

Every tree, flower, blade of grass

Every song the the bird sings

Every sweet breath of air

Every star, moon and sun

It's magic is bestowed upon me

luring me to be passionate, to be truthful

to be free, to feel peace

And now the sweet sun kisses my skin

I smile

The celestial dawn raining upon me

I am healed

I am vibrant

I am strong

I am healthy

I am whole within the infinity of the universe

And I ...

am grateful...

 

© 2009 LoLo


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This is so beautifully moving, with a deep sense of thankfulness and heartfelt appreciation. Your words were so lifting, and I could see the brilliance of the beauty come alive in the world. Thank you for this wonderful joy you've shared!

Posted 15 Years Ago


What an absolutely wonderful poem... beautiful, wonderful, full of appreciation for and love of life.

There's not a line out of place, or a phrase mis-used. LOVELY.


Posted 15 Years Ago


Dazzlingly beautiful. The only flaw I could find in this beautiful gem was the spelling of "pomegranate"; it has an "a" at the end there instead of an "i". I probably would not have noticed it but I love pomegranates. lol This is simply gorgeous!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 12, 2009
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Author

LoLo
LoLo

Appleton, WI



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I am a young female writer beginning on my writing journey. I live in the small city of Appleton, Wisconsin. Surrounding the Fox Cities are fields and fields country, cows, farmers, and of course mor.. more..

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