Lost In A Dream

Lost In A Dream

A Poem by LoLo
"

Little love song I dedicate to my friend.

"

Verse:

I won't deny it

If you wanna try it

To love me like you do

And no I won't fight it

I know  that tonight it

Could be something so true

Baby your sending

A vibe down my spine and

it's chilling to the bone

You got me surrounded

My heart is just pounding

Even as I sing this song


Chorus:

Lost in a dream tonight

Baby I'm losing my mind

Don't wanna sit tight

Just make it right

Tell me you'll be here

For me

On the lonely lonely nights


Can't take the yearning any longer

Baby my souls' setting on fire

Don't wanna wait

Just let me taste

Tell me you'll be here

For me

Come a sunny or rainy day

© 2009 LoLo


Author's Note

LoLo
Didn't finish this song, just a little accapella I made up one day, It might be pretty catchy if you heard me sing it it lol. Wrote this three years ago. Though songs are a bit different for me than poetry, others may think they are one and the same.

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I really love the lyrical flow and feel of your song. The rhythm is so perfect and the images create such a beautiful world of love and dedication. Please sing it for us sometime!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 25, 2009

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LoLo
LoLo

Appleton, WI



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