A Crease In Time

A Crease In Time

A Poem by LoLo
"

A moment to be noticed...

"

The sun filters through tree leaves

reflecting the warmth of a brilliant glow

Cotton sparkles float through the air

like fluffy stars

I am moved

Admiring true beauty

that resonates

with a simple touch of nature

I feel a sense of renewal and peace

awakening a desire within my being

My lips curve as an aura of rich purple

and lush green hues

encompass my body

A blissful energy I bathe

and melt inside of

I feel more alive than I have in years

This single moment

is more precious than any gem

This moment

defines eternal love and grace

I close my eyes

and let it pulse

like rapid fire

infinitely imprinting it's essence

so boldly without delay

I soak this celestial freedom

into the pores of my soul...

 

© 2009 LoLo


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So passionate and beautiful... Oh, to stay in the depth of that moment always. Profound and rich in your vivid description. Love this work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oh, fabulous! The imagery and descriptions; just lovely. This was a true pleasure to read. "A moment to be noticed" indeed!

Posted 15 Years Ago


A true delight to read, fresh and renewing. Excellent! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 17, 2009

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LoLo
LoLo

Appleton, WI



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