Bits and Pieces of a broken Twig

vanity’s lies

surprise~

it’s all just

smoke dust and fog

all that is left

is you

 

spent lust

swollen eyes~

skeletal grins

you pay for your sins

nothing left

but skin and bones

to chew

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

something to chew on:)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Certainly something to chew on ,
yes thats humans ,all All pride and vanity,all lust all mistakes never want to admit ,no they just go on and on
man think he is the most powerful creature on earth especially in his youth and at the prime of adulthood
Thanks God I understood the game so early and knew there is no weaker than Man ,yet he goes on with his atrocities
till his days comes to end where regret will never be of any use..
lovely write..

[Cherrie Palmer]

poem has a great flow and as always full of things to ponder

[deeps]

Wonderful and cute. Like this
Vanity is a horrible thing at least I think it is.
No one wants to admit they are wrong.
Usally when I do somethng wrong I seem to
have a gulity conscience. I like what you have penned here.