Awakenings (1)

A Creation Myth

Awakenings (1)

 

 

 

inside the rainbows emptiness

does the dance begin

day caresses night in erotic embrace

that fills the heavens with new born stars

glittering and twinkling in frenzied anticipation

to the climatic moment of synchronized execution

where heaven and earth join upon each other

 

The dawn awakes in rapturous delight

playfully flirting with the dew among the grass

the sun rises to a brand new day

shining forth its virility and vitality

singing its song of nourishment

towards the realm of its affection

as it anxiously awaits for its

moon soaked reception

 

Dusk appears before night

closing blinds to dim the light

the moon rises out of bed

spilling pale nectar

amongst the warm cool night

sighs of passion

in their own fashion

are heard

producing tidal waves and solar flares

as the sun and moons radiance

are merged

 

(from the book of songs, sung by the Archangel  Gabriella)

 

 

 

 

 

THE NIGHT MAKES ITS OWN LIGHT

 

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As Adam first looked upon Lilith, he was dumbfounded by her beauty. Strange feelings traveled throughout his body; making his head dizzy and his feet weak. She was a vision of loveliness, the smell of her made his manhood swell.

 

As Lilith first looked upon Adam, she was quite pleased with his handsomeness. Her body tingled with a desire that felt familiar to her. She also sensed that she had quite an effect on him, which she found amusing, and would soon use to her advantage.

 

They embraced one another and made their own heaven whilst the on-looking angels could do nothing more then blush…

 

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Lucifina summoned a legion of angels from the lower heavens to paradise. They all marveled at GOD’S new children and all the living creatures that inhabited this little pocket of heaven surrounded in the mist of Lucifer’s domain.  And now they were to become a part of this new adventure and their hearts were gladdened.

 

The First Ones voice rang through the angelic throng and commanded:

 

You will disperse your spirits within the fires, winds, earth, water and air of paradise. Your spirits will reside in the hearts of the trees, of the mountains and the seas, in the brooks and in the streams and on the moons golden beams. In winds will you ride and in clouds will you hide .Elementals will you be and God’s glory will you see.You will guide them and teach them how to command; all the elements of the seas, skies, and the land. So be it, so let it be done.

 

The angels cheered and dispersed there spirit throughout paradise…

 

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As Lucifina looked upon Adam and Lilith while they slept in each others arms, She remembered the song She and her Soul Twin made without GOD’S consent. Adam was Her song, and Lilith was His. And She loved them both.

 

 

 

 

 

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[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Dusk appears before night



closing blinds to dim the light

the moon rises out of bed

spilling pale nectar

amongst the warm cool night

sighs of passion

in their own fashion

are heard

producing tidal waves and solar flares

as the sun and moons radiance

are merged


My favorite part. I am ever the poet's poet.

Beautiful writing. Poetry is heavenly here, and the prose reads much like scripture (as I'm sure you intended.) I must admit that this is a BOLD undertaking. So far, in my opinion, you have handled it amazingly well. Guess what I'm trying to say is that this thing has alot of GUTS!

Cheers!
FF

[deeps]

The light of the day will be when all heaven and what is left from the earth will collide
as one. Such a wonderful expression here and i find it beuatiful really.

The dark will it has it's own light
the dawn will it has it's own
but what confuses me i guess
what is between?

what do we wait for?
What is the space between heaven and hell?
Do we live in a dark space?

I like this. found it lovely really