The Third Circle

The Gluttons

Hunger

Pigs in the pen

Feasting breathing eating

Mud slides ostracized compromised

Needing feeding seething beating cheating

 

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In the filth with the scum

and the dirt- YUM! YUM! YUM!

 

Bellies sore rot and gore

we want more- MORE! MORE! MORE!

 

Bodies bloated unwashed unsanctified

Greedy need is what makes them bleed

Damned are the vilified

Forever the

Hunger

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I made a Rictameter sandwich in this one- The filling was my own form. Sorry for not explaining these forms but you can look them up.

Reviews

[deeps]

Feeding off dirty and rotten souls of unholiness
is what the pig should classify us as.

We are nothing but pigs that yearn to
keep feeding us.

But are we really ever full?
Are we really satisfied?

Like you say we are sinking farther and farther away.
If the truth is suppose to set us free
why does it hurt so bad to say it?
It only makes people mad. Or could it be it's the
devil inside that is mad. Cause he don't want to face
the truth.

Awesome write!!

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

This is my favorite so far!
The form is perfect for the feeling!

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Nice!

FF