The First Circle

The Forgotten

tombstones and ice picks

faded memories lost dreams

pagan misery

 

in hell we were sent

forever to lament

no sins do stain our heart

no sins need we repent

upwards we always look

crossed out in heavens book

 

born before His time

considered a Godly crime

the resurrection

was not meant for us

 

original sin

did us in

 

Hosanna! Hosanna! Hosanna! 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

The first part is a senryu-the rest I followed my own form. I always felt the pagans got a raw deal-

Reviews

[deeps]

So very powerful and Oh! so true,
This is straight forward and to the point.

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

More power! Sermon of madness.
FF