From Heaven and Hell do Dreams and Nightmares come

dreamquests are for dreamers

Dreaming
a vision quest
surfing on a rainbow
I fall through the sky into a
Nightmare


Nightmare
twisted visions
the gates of hell open
I pray to God that I’m only
Dreaming

Dreaming
altered visions
a stairway to heaven
hell hounds bite at my heels… Damn this
Nightmare

Nightmare
a glimpse of hell
dark fire and pitch black night
asleep or awake I’m forever
Dreaming

Dreaming
of nirvana
embraced by nothingness
illusion an empty dream turned
Nightmare

Author's Note

I love Cinquains- This is what I call a Circle or Chain Cinquain -dreams and nightmares are our doorway into seperate realieties -all is illusion -these so happen to be mine...

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the cinquain contest!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Very well done! Cinquain chains, when done as well as you have, hold well together and are entertaining.

[angelina neves]

:) Divine!

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

I love cinquain chains! This is a good one!

Nightmare
a glimpse of hell
dark fire and pitch black night
asleep or awake I'm forever
Dreaming

Amen! I wonder if this would be inappropriate as an evening prayer...hmmm.

As always, Great stuff man!

FF

[Legion]

I like the to and fro of this. Reminds me of many of my nocturnal attempts at sleep. They don't come easy, but when they do I sometimes wish they didn't. Good work. Well done.