jealousy the doll

jealousy is like a doll

and sometimes the pins just fall in

and i know the point of the needle

well enough to want it gone

but we’re as soft as their fabric-

pervious- because love

works no other way

Reviews

[Lin]

I love your technique. This poem illustrates how much pain you just feel. Like being pierced in the heart. Well done!

[Ramsey]

i like it. you have a nice voice. this is definetely not like anything i have read before. well done

[Davidgeo]

I like how you write. You weave your thoughts into words quite nicely.

Made me think of pinhead from Hellraiser, but I suspect that was not your intent.

[wearejareth]

it wasn't but i love pinhead so it works out

[Davidgeo]

How do you feel about Bobby Darin?

[wearejareth]

i don't know him

[Natasha Zoya]

This gives a new definition for the term 'love hurts'