almost

i once almost told you i loved you

when the lips of a bottle had met mine

and mine had met yours,

and exclusivity was expelled at the time being

because i almost loved those bottle's lips

those cigarette hits

and quivering wit

but now after i've told you,

everyone else has fallen away

while we twirl eternal alone, almost

Author's Note

please feel free to critique as harshly as necessary

Reviews

[Samantha Croix]

I love it. I love the imagery. but i agree the you might not want to use the phrase "lips of the bottle" as much.

[wearejareth]

alright i'll make sure to change than then thank you

[CC]

Maybe don't use the expression "lips of the bottle" as much..? The ending is great and gives me chills👍🏼

[wearejareth]

thank you!