dreaming of you

The dream within holding you close

softly kissing you

waking beside you each morning

feels so real yet so far away

when will this dream come true

i do not know but i hope soon

i long for that kiss and that simple touch

i fall every time you say those words

they bring me to my knees 

please let this dream come true...

Reviews

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

I am so proud of you BILLIAM!!! I didn't know you could write. LOL.

Keep up the good work Bruh!

[613]

Beautifully written. (: I could relate to this immensely. Well done.

- Brittney

Would you mind checking out my novel, HIM? I'd truly appreciate it. (:

[gorillarock]

I hope this dream comes true for all of us! I love your use of "those words", the line grew my heart because it knew the answer to the mystery of what "those words" represent :D and it's so clear that the "fall" was in happiness, not despair.

I like how you speak of the object of affection early in the poem, and bring the reader in for the power-play by switching the focus to "I". I truly felt like I was brought to my knees with longing affection for someone unexpected (who I inadvertently inserted into the role of the object of affection) as I read this.

I thank you for such a vivid and powerfully emotional journey!