dreaming of serenity

i stare at these walls falling into a gentile sleep        

lost lost in this dream,

I stop to embrace the world before my eyes

where all is calm

where all is bright, never dual

a smile spread a crossed my face,

as i had found my serenity 

even if it was all just a dream.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Dreamy and lovely. Pen on...:).....

[Cindy Marietta]

I loved reading this, and the last line "even if it was all just a dream." is fantastic. Appreciation for dreams is so important, and embracing and enjoying positivity in whatever medium it may present itself in. Great poem!

[William Crider]

thanks for the review and yes i feel its important to stop and embrace the positive side of things.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Not bad, for a newbie! Lol
Nice job, Billy!
I always find myself, referring to my dreams for inspiration. Keep up the good work and for God's sake fill out your profile!

[William Crider]

I will!! lol thanks

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Lol. You're welcome. Now get busy! Lol