lonely world

the  lonely world 

walk into the lonely world people who dont care and pass you by  you gives things  your best but best is never good enough in this lonely world. You move yourself forward  but then take ten steps back in this lonely world.  You see how people win but win is not your game its never your game because your luck can never change. The people  tell you to go for it apply to your heart content  only to be told  your place  has went and still you try but to no reply because its nothing can change  the  bad luck of your  unlucky  way.

tYou  sometimes win but this is very short lived  the  danger and despair of  lost hope of   giving  life  s very rare. you smile and be happy and then the crushing  bones fall upon your   name and knock the smile off your face  why oh why we bother  lonely world of life  

produced and owned by wayne m 

Author's Note

ok

Reviews

[Ghost writer]

I like it, I think it has really good flow, looks like you tipped it up in a hurry tho, maybe read through it again