Forbidden Love

I was a girl, you were a boy when we first kissed once upon a time

You were a boy

I was a girl 

When we first kissed

Once upon a time

Our hearts intertwined

In another world

And now

I am here, a boy

Not looking for a girl

What I seek

Once was

A forbidden love

Reviews

[Kurl Urban]

Its amazing what you doing with the use of simple wording to paint such a vivid picture that requires one to look once, twice and more, just to capture the scene. It has this "I need to go deeper and found out more" effect. Some will say it is the disadvantage but your poetry makes the type of sounds I would kill for (figuratively), it calls and begs to be understood....

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Thank you kindly, Kurl, for the review and for reading.